[k]Another place, another time.[/k] The tall, handsome stallion caught himself pondering stray thoughts inside his mind, unnerving in a strange way. His sleek figure made its way in a north-east direction, marching along high cliffs. Many meters below him, waves crashed against the rocky shore and a crisp wind was screaming as it trailed above the water's edge and up the cliffs. Venom, as this dark stallion was called, sighed and halted for a few seconds to take in the grand vista. He'd trailed along the shore and cliffs from early dawn on, but - as of yet - had not been able to glimpse or contact Raphael or either one of his fellow Seven.
Another huge sigh made it's way over his lips. [k]Raphael really needs to work on his cryptic descriptions. How is anyone going to find him if he never leaves exact summons?[/k] Venom's smile grew bitter. As he turned away from the roaring sea and started to trot, he immediately felt his anger about the Sire wash off. No, it wasn't Raphael giving orders this time, the black one remembered. It was Dmitri. [k]Yeah, that's right. Blame ole', nasty Dmitri.[/k] A slow, lopsided smile creeping onto his harsh, exotic features, Venom kicked into gear and raced along the cliffs, galloping away from any debates going on inside his head.
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Venom
The soft light of the weak winter-sun shimmered on her grey fur, in which small snow crystals are caught. The wind blew cold on her, so her body began to chatter. Dmitri would not be encouraged, that she broke her promise. "Rest at home.", he said. But her will to be free was too immense. But now? Her hooves swirled through the fresh snow. Her eyes starred, not even able to realize the nature around her. Her thoughts rotated about the one thing: Uram. His venom turned her blood from red to black, her eyes got a green loom and her blood-lust became more and more. She would die, she knows. But maybe that would be the freedom, she's looking for. Sorrow - that's the name she gave herself. Cause that's all she feels: sorrow, pain and self-hatred.
A dark sparkle in the edge of her eye; another horse. Sorrow stopped short and fixed the other with her sorrowful eyes. No noise came from her, but the gentle breath. There was no one, except Dmitri, for months. She felt so alone. Her heart knocked hard against her chest, as she set one hoof ahead another. "Sorry...uhm... I'm Sorrow." She smiled a painful smile, a sad smile. Not knowing, that the stallion in front of her was one of The Seven.
Racing along the rocky shore, straying never too far from the deadly fall of the cliffs, Venom was finally able to set aside any of his discomforts and snarly thoughts. From time to time, he felt the beast inside him rising, staring out of his now dark and feverish eyes. Neha's beast. For he was Neha's creature to the core, her madness lurking inside his every cell, inside his mind perhaps. The black stallion snorted, stopping dead at preternatural speed. He'd glimpsed another horse, another fellow. A soft white, if not pale creature. Venom turned his head, a smirk playing around his mouth, a whinny roaring out of his throat.
[k]By all the Ancients![/k] He could hear the pale-faced mare's heart pounding against her rip cage. What was her problem? Venom snorted, feeling the beast waking, coming to life, sizzling through his veins. [k]Oh no. Of all moments, this right now was the worst of all.[/k] The black one caught a painful smile of the gray, her voice rising towards and greeting him: [k]"Sorry... uhm... I'm Sorrow."[/k] Eyes narrowing, so she wouldn't spot the beast's green and slitted eyes at once, he gave her a curt nod. "Venom." The little one seemed frightened, though he hadn't done a single, unnatural thing as of yet. "Nice to meet you", he added but his tone was dry, business-like.
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Her body chattered, but not because of the icily wind nor the snow under her hooves. It was the cold inside her heart since Uram envenomed her blood and her soul turned into black and grey shades. She scared, as his voice cutted the air as an razor. Buisness-like, cold, reserved. Anything about him wasn't normal at all, but she coulnd't understand it. The feeling to stay next to him. Another feeling, than standing next to a mortal. Maybe Uram's venom gave her the ability to notice abnormalities like that. "You are... one of them." A moment of silence. "One of us." She hushed. Of course. Now she was one of them, but not at all. Normal eternals where born by angels and archangels. She was made up by a blood angel. Made by an in mania decayed angel. Dmitri warned her, she shouldn't talk to other horses, other creatures. But her loneliness made her blind and now? She's standing in front of an eternal creature, maybe hundreds of years older than her. Would he kill her? "Maybe you shouldn't touch me, if the name Dmitri is not a foreign word to you. He would avenge me." The fear in her voice can't be ignored. But she also knew, that most of them fear Dmitri so maybe that's her chance.
Alter, wie grauenhaft o___O Ich hoffe du verstehst dieses fehlervolle Kauderwelsch.
The almost-immortal turned his head a fraction, inclining it towards the pretty, gray mare, while listening to her hushed words. She knew the minute, the fraction of a second, that her fragile body rested near his own muscular one, what he was. Now, that was truly interesting. He'd thought her a mortal, a young and terrifyingly human creature. But her whisper told him otherwise: [k]"You are ... one of them. One of us."[/k] Venom snorted, raising his head so that his eyes'd meet Sorrow's. His abnormal eyes, glowing a bright, feverish green and it's slits revealing the beast within. "I highly doubt that we are of the same kind, girl." An undercurrent of his exotic Indian accent flowing through his voice, even though the sound of it still remained as calm and collected as before.
But her next words sent him off: [k] "Maybe you shouldn't touch me, if the name Dmitri is not a foreign word to you. He would avenge me."[/k] She knew Dmitri? Venom's head shot up, his ears tilting to and fro, his long, silky tail squishing around nervously. "How come you know the [k]Dark Overlord[/k]?" Trying to regain his coolness, Venom focused on the tiny mare's body, roaming her frame with his strange, preternatural eyes. "I'm afraid to say, you're not his type, at all.. So no love story, huh?" The massive stallion bared his teeth a fraction, sneering at the gray beauty.
Passt schon, Lisa. Meins ist auch bei weitem nicht perfekt ;D
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A sigh came out of her throat, she noticed her mistake. It was a bad idea to defy Dmitri's adjustment. It would be better, if she rested in her little hideout, where nobody's able to hurt her. But the loneliness.... You would never understand the pain of the soul, if you where never alone in the darkness, never alone at day. Sorrow was fated to die. There's no solution for one like her. She knew. "Not the same kind, I agree. What's done to me is such a crime, you know? Ever heard of Uram?" Maybe she shouldn't give this information, but what to lose? After that little walk against the rules Dmitri would be as angry about her, he would kill her somehow or other.
She saw the eyes of the beast but she didn't move back. In her past, there were more cruel and brutal monsters as an snake-eyed stallion. Deep breath. One second of silence. "I know him. Yes. Raphael told him to control me." Another bite on her tongue. Maybe she shouldn't offer such explosive details. But all in all, she had nothing to lose. Her life, her death - foreseeable.
The almost-immortal kept his beastly eyes on the mare's pure and feminine figure. As slender and delicate as her outer figure seemed, her frame of mind told otherwise, spoke of a tough and strong will not to be crushed by anyone. Yet the terrors in her voice as she asked Venom whether he'd heard of Uram, the archangel gone crazy and berserk, hunting for blood rather than fighting terrors similar to the one he'd in the end become.
The muscular, black stallion nodded, his answer coming out brief and brisk: "Of course have I heard of Uram. Who in the world hasn't? Do I look that young and sluggish to your weak, mortal eyes?" Yet she'd spoken of a crime that had been done to her. And at once Venom understood. "I've heard of your case. Your real name is Holly. Though... [k]Sorrow.[/k] Well, I can see why you chose that name instead of keeping your old one. That's a thing we both have in common." Though Venom was old enough to, by now, having had forgotten his original name. The black one smiled, starting to grow some sympathy for the young gray mare.
[Arghl... Das war auch schonmal besser. ^^]
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Sadness stood in her sight and there was a frisson inside her small, weak body. He said her true name; Holly. Once, she gave herself the name "Sorrow", she never wanted to hear this name anymore. "Holly is dead." A frozen, dry answer. She wasn't in the mood to talk about her life before Uram, especially with this guy. But then a spark glimmed in her eyes. A common ground? Intuitively she thought about his true name, but she didn't ask him. He wouldn't answer. But then something came on her mind, a little smile came on her lips. "But... erm... you won't say anything to Dmitri?! He won't be amused of my little walk. He said, i'm not strong enough to get out of my hide, or better: prison." A soft laughter gave her a beautiful look and for some seconds, moments, her sadness was gone and Holly came out of the beast, she now was. As she looked in his eyes she believed in it. Snaky, strange eyes. But she knew, that Venom won't kill her.
Hach. Ich übe noch ;D Ich sollte mal wieder ein englischsprachiges Buch lesen.
The curt words cut through the silence that'd followed the things he had voiced before, sounding more hollow than he'd ever thought possible. The strong black stallion turned away from the beautiful gray, his beastly eyes roaming the scenery like stray cats with no place to go. Except his eyes knew very well where they would like to go, knew that he could never get enough of the sheer beauty of her sight despite the wild, untamed girl she'd become after Uram. "Of course." His words were a sharp response, mimicking her own tone. "I will tell none of the things discussed between you and me, if you should wish so. And you being weaker than what is thought safe doesn't matter as long as I am with you." Venom bared his teeth in a menacing grin, inching closer to the gray beauty. He didn't know if it was true attraction or sheer lust that rode him but he wanted this shattered woman close, under his skin, feeling a connection pulsing between them like with no-one else. Him, Neha's pet - and her, Uram's beast. What a lovely coincidence.
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She smiled at him, a strange feeling for her. Such a long time without any reason to smile. Maybe Dmitris jokealikes, stupid trials to make a beast smile. But that smile, it was real. It was concrete. Venom gave her a feeling of normality. The best feeling she ever had since Uram. The black one. His closeness felt good. Good for her. But he shouldn't know that. She won't let him know. "I'm weak. Yet." She knew, she became stronger and stronger every day. But maybe (or better: sure) that would be her death sentence. Raphael gave her a chance, but her existence was a risk. No one could guess, what she'll became. A monster like Uram? Killing, destroying, hating? There was no future, she knew. And the time was limited. So she tried to make the best out of it. "Oh Venom, I don't need a bodyguard." A catlike smile sparkled at her lips, risky and sexy at once. "My end will come, so or so. It's only a question of time. So maybe you'll try to sweeten this time?" No one else treated her like a normal girl, a normal mare. But he did. And thats why he liked him, the snake-eyed.
Venom stared at the serene beauty, eyeing her with suspicion and fascination alike. What was she telling him? Did she really mean the things she said? He'd never believed her to be audacious. But her voice had lowered a fraction, now sounding raspy, husky and stirring his most primal feelings. [k]"So maybe you'll try to sweeten this time?"[/k] Did she really know what she was saying?
A wash of sweet, spicy smell was in the air the next moment, stroking the stallion's nostrils ever so gently. O.k. - she really knew what she was saying. Or at least her hormones did. A deep, rumbling sound growled inside Venom's chest as he reached out with his nose, grazing along her delicate neck and planting butterfly kisses on every inch of her skin. "Sorrow. Don't dare torturing me." The black stallion's eyes were aflame, desire and primal lust blazing in those snake-green slits. "Sorrow... I could make you forget everything. It'd be just you, and me... and raw sensuality."
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Maybe her hormons commanded her acting. Maybe it was true sympathy leading her. Venom seemed to be as dangerous as the most poisonous snake, but sorrow also was as dangerous as a wild cat. Maybe a baby-cat, now. But her strength grow and she knew, who she was. Even if she doesn't want to be like this. Of course, Venom always will be stronger than her, but one wrong movement and she'll tear his heart into peaces. "What do you think, Venom? Am I playing?" She giggled and saw in his beautiful, but strange eyes. "I don't have anything to loose. No friends. No family. So what do I have? It's frustrating, believe me." He had the position as one of the Seven. But Sorrow? Nothing, but a monster. A beast. "They fear me. They look at me as I am an trial. A try. They look, how long I keep my head up. But you..." Her soft lips grub in his mane. "You noticed me as a mare, as a breathing and feeling person. Not the beast, all the other see in me. Thats why I thank you. You can believe me." The words were hard to say, she never offered her feelings so directly.
The black stallion fell silent as Sorrow began talking, pouring her heart out for him, telling him everything. And Venom understood. He felt her trust within every word she said, felt the sudden urge to keep this woman close, hold her to his heart. Was she really trying to tell him, that she felt like she didn't belong? Was she telling him that she felt like an abomination, despised by the crowd for what was done to her?
Sorrow could have found no better friend to listen to her, who'd understand. Venom himself was always the strange one, Neha's creature, more the serpent than a mortal or a Made being. People saw his eyes and backed away, fearing the outside and not ever getting to know his inside, learning his feelings. They never wanted to. "Well, it's the bitterness of life. The bitterness of being different. It makes us special." The stallion smiled, motioning forward and touching the small mare. Her warmth felt nice, sinking through his skin right into his heart.
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The snake-eyed listened to her words, she told with honesty. Venom was the first and only one, trying to understand. She was a trial. No more. Only an experiment, cause she was the only one made by a blood-angel. Would she survive? Not even Sorrow thinks so. Why should others? "Special.", she whispered. "I had anything I could wish for, Venom. I was a normal mare. Friends, family, future. And now? Everyday the poison can take over me. And then? They'll kill me. Now I'm helpless and not dangerous. But then? A monster, made by a monster. Hazardous." This self-pity nerved her, but thats the first time, she can talk about the life-controlling problems. The first time, somebody listened to her. And then... A warm feeling on her skin, like pins and needles. Her eyes wide open stared at small venom-green slots. He touched her. And it felt good. Tears sparkled out of her eyes. "It's true. We are different. The only differential between us: you are a beautiful, unique creature. I am a moribund monster."
Venom gaped at the pretty mare, his jaw nearly hitting the floor and his eyes big and round, staring at Sorrow. [k]"We are diffent."[/k], she had said the words as sober and flat as commenting on the weather. But then.. "Me? A beautiful and unique creature?!" Venom tried to tear his eyes off of the grey mare but couldn't stop himself from gaping. All too soon the massive, black stallion burst out laughing. Tears sprang to his eyes, watering his sight but the laughter continued to tumble over and over, shaking his whole frame and stealing his last breath. "You can't be serious... gotta be joking, that's what you are." He pressed out the words, finally managing to take a deep breath again and then looked the truly beautiful woman in the eye. "Listen to me closely, Sorrow. I might be unique but there's only so much beauty as with a thousand horrors underneath. Really. You can trust me if I say that you wouldn't want to be near me at night-time." His green, slitted eyes flashed speaking of demons and untamed wildness within him. "Chick, have you ever stopped for a moment to look at yourself? If you ain't radiating sheer and natural beauty then I don't know what is." Venom shook his head, taking in her sight with clear approval.
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His laughter got in her slender ears, hurted her deep inside. "You don't have to laugh at me, Venom." , her voice full of bitterniss. "I know, you are as dangerous as godfather himself. But I trust you. You won't kill me, if I don't give you a reason to." But then, a cruel thought in her head. Slowely she looked in his eyes. "You are one of them..." Of course, he was. And if the poison comes over her, he had to... "You will kill me, Venom. You'll have to...." An unbeliveable sadness took her, as she walked some steps back. Away from him. "That's why we got together, right? There is so sympathy or whatever. You had to take a look at me. You're just waiting for a mistake. And then... It's all just an order of Dmitri oder Raphael... And I thought... I'm so stupid." There was no chance for her, to survive. Her life ended, as Uram put his blood in her vains. And now, she only has to wait until it's effective. As soon as the bloodlust awakes, her heart will be outside of her body and the last breath will be taken.
"What?" The black stallion stared at Sorrow, the beautiful mare whose eyes were now filled with grief and a sense of loss, Venom had the urge to fight the instance it crept onto her face. Her mumbled words seemed to make no sense - at first. But when he concentrated, he was able to follow her train of thought and understood the anxiety the greyish mare tried to express.
She thought Raphael had sent him. And if not the Archangel himself, surely his second would have ordered the beastly stallion to put an end to all of Sorrow's plans. An end to this painfully human-no longer-human life. "Sorrow! Good God, no. You totally got that wrong. Where did this nonsense come from?" The black one reared onto his hind legs, throwing his mane back, neighing harshly. "I'm n0t gonna kill ya. Of course, you're right, if the Dark Overlord ordered it, I would have to. But to be honest - I wouldn't. Not anymore because you're no longer 'just a face' to me." Venom sighed deeply, straining to take a step forward to comfort the grey mare with all her sorrows.
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Emptiness stood in her eyes, cought her whole body. Confidence. Such a lovely word, bitter word - too close to disappointment. What if all those words where lies? What if nearly every speach he did was false at all? She thought, the snake-eyed could be like a friend, but now she realized: he is one of them. He never would disdain anything the archangels says. He would kill her with a sleek smile on his beautiful face. Her heart broke, while she thought about the situation. Confidence is such a senseless word, if you have no reason to trust somebody. "Oh Venom, we both know: you'll have to and you will. It's the only way you can choose. Maybe I should understand and shut up. It's not good to try to be the friend of the enemy...." Her words were full of bitterness with a little spark of sarcasm. If you have no reason to hope, you have no reason to be friendly at all.
The wind played with her long, white mane. It sounds, like the flaw sang a song about sadness and pain. And she felt it... She really felt it, while she looked up the ocean, listened to the break of the waves nearly under the cliffs. What if she skipped that cliffs? What if she broke her life up herself? A little more glory than dying by Venoms hoof?
"Hush, Sorrow." Venom's voice tried to rip the mare from her darkest thoughts, tried to keep her from making a serious mistake. "I should be hurt to hear that you give so little for my word. Do you really think of me as Dmitri's puppet? I am a man myself, with choices and freedom to decide." The black stallion turned away from her, started walking. What was she thinking? Did she really believe they'd kill her, no matter what? Only if there were no other possibility to save her and a thousand's more lives, would they have to bring her down.
Venom growled, shook his head and finally begann closing in on the silvery-greyish mare. He'd noticed her eyes travelling towards the earth's open jaw, ready to swallow whomever stumbled too near. Venom gently started herding Sorrow away from the cliffs, began talking again. "Let us take a walk, get to know each other. What is your favourite sound?" Whether he meant a musical sound, or a natural one, he seemed truly interested. "I like the sound of the early morning. The sun rising, birds starting their songs, the soft neighing of the early risers." The black one grinnend, turned to look at Sorrow.
